Some people believe that should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do agree or disagree?
In the current time of technology advancement, one of the pressing concerns is regarding the given topic asserts that should people pay their herder money to the government or not? I completely disagree with this statement and shell explorer the same from various aspects in the following paragraphs.
To commence with, it is a fact that taxes are used by the government for developing its nation. Taxes are important for various types of essential matters. Firstly, they have used for maintaining public transportation facilities such as expanding roads and highways and replacing old public transportation units. Secondly, taxes are providing medical services and basic education for their residents. However, taxes are also used for funding military services, which is important for maintaining political stability of a nation. For example, if people suffer from cancer, where treatment of cancer is costly and a person cannot afford the medical cost. The aid given by the government reduces this expenditure.
Furthermore, people should also notice that taxes that they have paid, will also be beneficial for themselves in later. But also, some of the funds that have been collected by tax authorities are used for retirement funds. So in that way people will enjoy their life and benefit, some person facilities from the government which are funded from taxes. So the taxes are beneficial for the development of county and society.
In conclusion, as we have seen that there are number of answers to this question. However, i tend to believe that taxes are beneficial for the development of the people or nation of the people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22433460076 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80758767281 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539923954373 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.210038643 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196816129433 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669776088738 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538232257588 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130922791757 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413796010472 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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