some people believe that space exploration has more to do with national pride rather than international effort.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
How do you think space exploration will change in the future?
These days, some people presume that in interplanetary exploration there is no room
for international endeavor but it is developed solely for gaining national contentment. From my perspective, I feel that most countries choose to be cooperative than to be competitive, simply because the first way of conduct brings more benefits such as diplomatic and cost-effective incentives.Nevertheless,some spacefaring nations prefer to make advancements in outer space exploration on their own in order to take advantages of being the space superpowers .This essay will also discuss some feasible improvements in space technology that may provide incredible opportunities for people such as cheap space vacations.
On the one hand, many countries go for international cooperation for the number of reasons. Firstly, collaboration in outer space exploration have the potential to reduce a partner’s expenses by spreading a burden to every participant. In other words, space exploration has proven to be a very expensive activity and some countries are unable to execute their goals in this project on their own. That is why they have an incentive to engage in international partnership by doing so can reduce the nation’s costs. Secondly, the participation of other nations enhances the diplomatic influence and, therefore, the diplomatic utility derives from cooperation. If the symbol of cooperation is highly valued and delivered well, the alliance will create or strengthen the relationships between countries. For example, if India joins the ISS endeavor, the US- Indian relationship will be fortified.
On the other hand, in some cases space exploration reflects the country’s vanity rather than international effort.To begin with, in the recent years, the development of space exploration has become an effective tool for some countries to show off their power to other nations. That is to say, the country who become a space exploration technology superpower reaps influence on the political arena or gain respect and admiration of some nations.Furthermore, the progress of the space technology may depict the national honor and patriotic sentiment.To be precise, it can be observed that the space exploration stations and rockets have almost always had their own unique design and symbol depending on which country has built them so as to show their pride.
Nowadays the space exploration companies strive to make our lives easier and more comfortable by dealing with alarming issues and providing more chances for space traveling.First of all, the recent space research disclosed that in the future the renewable resources may be supplied from space to earth to handle a problem with natural resources depletion.Moreover, the companies such as NASA intend to colonize the Red planet in order to deal with overpopulation issue.In addition, it is anticipated that space technology will have reached the level when people will stand a chance of cheaply travel across the universe and have 10 minute space vacations whenever they want.
All in all,the international collaboration in space exploration is more desirable and profitable due to benefits it provides.However,some countries keep on being rigid and competitive owing to feeling of egocentrism and patriotism.What about future development of outer space exploration, there is great possibility that it could help the humans to get rid of various issues that hamper our life in the earth.Furthermore, advancements of space technology may give an opportunity to traveling to other planets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, as to, for example, i feel, in addition, such as, first of all, in other words, in some cases, to begin with, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 41.998997996 181% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 8.3376753507 336% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3020.0 1615.20841683 187% => OK
No of words: 543.0 315.596192385 172% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56169429098 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82725184711 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47665393173 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 285.0 176.041082164 162% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524861878453 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 964.8 506.74238477 190% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 194.112241062 49.4020404114 393% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 232.307692308 106.682146367 218% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.7692307692 20.7667163134 201% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.7692307692 7.06120827912 294% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309390026112 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105175049017 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648137189905 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16411843141 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329789766713 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.6 13.0946893788 195% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 12.94 50.2224549098 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 11.3001002004 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.86 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 152.0 78.4519038076 194% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 34.5 9.78957915832 352% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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