Competitional sports are common for adolescents, such as racing, swimming and ball games. Some people believe that tense competition in sports causes emotional stress among youngsters. Therefore, students must be prohibited from participating in competitional sports. Personally, I disagree with this practise. Reasons are as followed.
First of all, competitional sports induce excitement rather than stress. Students are eager to win in sports and they are excited to participate in it. As a matter of fact, adolescents never absent from sports because of the so-called emotional stress. Actually they enjoy the competition in sports. Take myself for example, the first competition I participated was 400 meters race. I was extrimely excited about it and enjoyed the applaudes and cheers from my classmates.
Secondly, participating in match nurish sportsmanship. There are plenty of short cuts and advantages if palyers do not abide by rules. Howerer, only the winner who sticks to rules deserves the respect from rivals and audiences. That is sportsmanship. Adolescents acknowledge the concept of sportsmanship gradually in the participation of sports. They may take short cut in theri first match, but jadges will give a foul to them and urge them to follow rules. Consequently, young people develop the essencials of sportsmanship.
Lastly, match works as an incentive to improve performance of paticipationer. Losing a match is normal. A paticipationer realises his weakness and contrive to conquer it. That faciliates the improvement of performance. Lebron James is a NBA superstar. He experienced lose of games like other players. The difference is that he found out the weakness and overcame it. He practiced basketball skills and built a robust body, that rendered the superstar of today.
To recapitulate, sports competitions do not cause stress, actually it is excitement. Also, match benefits the development of sportsmanship and improvement of players. That is why I believe young people should not be baned from paticipating in match.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'shortcut'?
Suggestion: shortcut
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'if', 'lastly', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'such as', 'as a matter of fact', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.277777777778 0.247107183377 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.158333333333 0.155533422707 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0583333333333 0.0946595960268 62% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0472222222222 0.0501214627716 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0555555555556 0.0437548338989 127% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.119444444444 0.122226691241 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0222222222222 0.0403226058552 55% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.28862841403 2.80594681477 117% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0222222222222 0.0326793684256 68% => OK
Particles: 0.00277777777778 0.00163938923432 169% => OK
Determiners: 0.075 0.0861772015684 87% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0111111111111 0.021408717616 52% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00833333333333 0.011925033212 70% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2061.0 1933.35771543 107% => OK
No of words: 315.0 316.048096192 100% => OK
Chars per words: 6.54285714286 6.12580529183 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.428571428571 0.374742101984 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.311111111111 0.28420135186 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.24126984127 0.203846283523 118% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.184126984127 0.137316102897 134% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28862841403 2.80594681477 117% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.037074148 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590476190476 0.56093040696 105% => OK
Word variations: 65.6483718719 60.7387585426 108% => OK
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0891783567 180% => Less sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 10.8620689655 20.7743622355 52% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.2734618719 49.517814964 49% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0689655172 127.492653851 56% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.8620689655 20.7743622355 52% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.551724137931 0.814263465372 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 41.9731800766 49.1944974215 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.60638297872 1.69124875643 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223038483332 0.332605444948 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0444250596271 0.102741220458 43% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0551573750093 0.0668466124924 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.39716104582 0.534860350844 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.101020998161 0.148594505496 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067663026562 0.134430193775 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636788667865 0.0742795772207 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.300173019491 0.324371583561 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0196331169207 0.0638462369009 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154132310498 0.228012699653 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738000231706 0.058150111329 127% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.41683366733 293% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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