some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to successful career, while other believe that it is better to get job straight after school. discuss both views .
Irrefutably ,students ultimately seek for higher pay and job satisfaction. It is debatable argument that several individuals opine that to have a triumphant career, juveniles need to get a degree from university or college. However ,rest of masses claim that directly opting job will give a better career in long run. The essay would shed light on the standpoint in the subsequent paragraphs.
To commence with the first school of thought ,pursuing higher studies in reputed universities will probably serve with a great career option ,which are essential for aspirants to get a wide range of job opportunities with a good amount of salaries. To exemplify ,a recent survey done by some oxford universities states that ,student whose pay is reasonably high are got graduated from universities ,at initial stages of work life. So some students tend to acquire a degree from institutions. Nevertheless ,according to second school of thoughts ,Directly opting for job will benefit the juveniles with a gift called 'Experience'. As they start their work life at early days ,in long run this experience will aid them to earn a pretty good pay. For example ,I personally came across a person ,who started his working career with a low profile but , now he earns comparatively good pay than other who have graduated from universities ,because of the experience he earned in course of time ,owing to this reason some of the students tend to directly go for job . In the final reckoning ,This essay tend to reiterate that everything has its own significance ,nothing cannot be ignored. Although ,successful career depend up on students interest and commitment to build a good career .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07636363636 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94648257614 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.6977949015 49.4020404114 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.6 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161152772589 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615520109314 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388881536515 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131944341804 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.000495499401076 0.056905535591 1% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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