What the world has been facing today is the dilemma of the people who just graduated from high school. They don't know whether they should keep on studying at university or get a job quickly. While others believed that they must find a job immediately after school, I Strongly argue that the best route for us is to keep studying at college or university.
the option to start a job straight after graduation is attractive for several reasons. Many young people opt to earn money as soon as possible In this way, they will become independent, have the right to make their own decisions, and maybe is such a breadwinner for their families. In terms of their career, besides, young people who decide to find work can have the opportunity to get real experiences and acquire practical skills related to their chosen profession. These may act as the premise for promotion and becoming successful more quickly.
On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial to continue their studying at high level. in the first place, academic qualifications are often required in certain jobs. for instance, you can't become a doctor, a teacher, or a policeman without having a relevant degree. Moreover, as we see today, the job market has been becoming more and more competitive so requires a lot of our power and knowledge. As a result, the more qualifications you can amass, the higher chances of a high-paying job you get. Sometimes there are hundreds of applicants for just one position, you are likely qualified for that if you meet most of the requirements, especially if you have the education, experience, and special knowledge
Taking everything into consideration I would have to say students who continue their studying beyond the school level are more likely to be successful in their career
- Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, as a result, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90163934426 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78947998783 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586885245902 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.274595795 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215491078579 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802024510888 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886660567046 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13757718692 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978530647123 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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