Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a straight job after school.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
After finishing high school, young people face the dilemma of where whether to continue continue your their education or take a job. While there are some benefits to looking for a job. I would argue that going to college or university is the best choice.
On the one hand, the option to start work straight after shoo school to attractive for several reasons. Firstly young people could earn money by yourself to cover the cost of life. In this way they become more independent and know the best way to save and money compared to the students at the same age In term of their career, young people have the chance to progress more quickly. They will have chance to gain experience and learn practical skills that lead to promotions and a success full career.
One the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial for students, to continue their studies. Most of the jobs from big companies or multinational companies require academic qualification. As a result, university graduates have access to better job opportunities and they tend to earn higher salaries than those with fewer qualifications. In addition, those who do not learn at university or college have difficulties in competitions among hundreds of applicants for one position in company.
In conclusion, I believe that studying at college or university has a positive impacts on achieving successful careers than young people give up learning at university or college.
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... up learning at university or college.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0125 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79344159993 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8794909066 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.25 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31467706665 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101721530328 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731461390706 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197328438026 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795878075272 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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