People have different views about attending to the university lay a firm foundation for getting ahead in career. While some argue that it would be better for high school-students to find a job immediately after school, I believe that everyone should be prepared the intimate knowledge of specific major in college before starting their own business.
There are various reasons why people believe that looking for a job right after high school graduation can be make them purse a successful career soon. Firstly, their parents don’t have a clear perception of educative effect that can create a huge impact on human development. Unless they fully appreciate the necessity of education, parents will not have great expectations of what university is suitable for their children. Secondly, student whose learning outcomes is not good enough when they study at senior high occasionally thinking that they would not get better in learning even if attending to the university. In other words, students who are not good at studying in high school and always play truant instead of improving their schooling believing that education can not play an important role in their working life.
In spite of these arguments, I believe that college is not only could bring the specialist knowledge, but it also makes sure that students have been prepared essential experience for their occupation. There are a large number of soft skills that could practice when studying at university such as time management, teamwork, leadership, problem solving. For example, before receiving a Bachelor Degree, seniors have to present a graduate thesis which was extensively researched by their own students. During these studies, the learners need to have a 2-month internship at organization which relates to their major so that they could broaden their working experience before graduation. On the other hand, in the fourth industrial revolution, a great deal of enterprises set a high requirement for employee so that people who has graduated from university could have more good chances of getting a job.
In conclusion, although it might seem sensible for people to quit the college for career, I personally prefer to attend to the university because of its value could bring to students.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...erience for their occupation. There are a large number of soft skills that could practice when st...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in other words, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1914.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27272727273 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78828163772 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578512396694 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.6157999643 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.230769231 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9230769231 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4615384615 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241137462561 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875039489067 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658839644439 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159590505411 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699387469728 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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