Some people believe that studying at university or colleges is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
Discuss both view and give an opinion.
After graduation from high school, young people faced a serious dilemma to decide which choose to get a job or attend college. Both sides have many benefits, however, it depends on a person's ability and personality too. In my point of view, I strongly believe that post-secondary students should attend university to insure have a better job in the future.
To begin with, for young people, they like the idea to start work straight after school is attractive for many reasons. The first proposes is earring money to help them to become independent people, meaning that they can settle down earlier, afford a house, and have a family. On the other hand, there are reasons related to having a good professional life that they seek to gain experience and work to get promotions in the work. For example, many wealthy people around the world leave college and work in the market for seeking to gain experience. Some people seek to learn the business and personal skills that educational institutions do not teach to students.
The main reasons are the best job opportunities have required academic qualifications which have earned a higher salary. For instance, the CEO job requires a special academic qualification for employment in this place. The other reason because of their ambition to gain more academic knowledge due to the job market is very competitive. Firstly, many employees are the ambition to raise their stations on work and become a useful member of society.
In conclusion, both points of view have many positive effects on person lifework, I strongly believe that complete higher education for students overweight the benefits of getting a job after school. In the future, it might be having practical and academic studies in the same progress.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...many benefits, however, it depends on a persons ability and personality too. In my poin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09246575342 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70709159528 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578767123288 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3163614635 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.214285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195740938274 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647551975878 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056247158551 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127827939114 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576935561877 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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