Some people believe that success in life depends upon hard work and determination, while others believe that other factors like money and physical appearance are important.
Discuss both view and give your opinion?
Success plays an inevitable role in the life of an individual. Presently, there has been a debating issue regarding whether a person can become successful with the assistance of great hard work and resolution or finance and physical beauty. However, i firmly assert that bucks as well as personality are essential to achieve breakthrough in life.
As far as my view is concerned, multifarious points can be mentioned to depict why wealth and personal look has an importance in the successful life of demose. First and foremost is enables segments of society to reach deep desires. To elaboeate, there is no doubt that if a person has adequate money then he or she can fulfill his or her whole desires which can lead to success. For example, if one has hefty sums of money then a person is able to get not only pile of money but also also a great name and fame simultaneously the person do not has to be deprived for accomplishing neccessities. Consequently, having large amount of money is an ideal approach to attain success.
Moreover, with aid of an alluring personal appearance, it is very easier to impress others especially during a job as most of jobs are based upon the personality of workers, working at job premises. So, employees can influence their consumer due to their body posture and wearing clothes to escalate the productivity.
Opposite wind also blows there, opponents advocate that success is given to those who do hard work with the determination. To commence with this, it can be generally seen that if masses are hard working and take determination to achieve something then they can get immense life experiences because while hard work and completing deadlines they have to face plethora of implications which can protect them from the furure uncertainties because they become veteran by taking rusks.
In conclusion, although working diligently and being determinate, folks may be able to jump the mark of success yet i advocate that wealth and good looks are the fundamental needs to hit the goals to great extent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: also
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Message: Did you mean 'have'?
Suggestion: have
...d fame simultaneously the person do not has to be deprived for accomplishing necces...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the jobs') or simply say ''most jobs''.
Suggestion: most of the jobs; most jobs
...press others especially during a job as most of jobs are based upon the personality of worke...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...be able to jump the mark of success yet i advocate that wealth and good looks are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, so, then, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95362318841 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88174257068 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588405797101 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.2648763255 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.461538462 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5384615385 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9230769231 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156729538488 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527726858467 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306334888628 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802204919973 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283024901507 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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