Some people believe that technology has made the lives of workers easier while other people disagree To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Some people believe that technology has made the lives of workers easier while other people disagree. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In this world, technology becomes mandatory in the routine lifestyle. Some folks opine that labourer life gets too easy due to the development of technology. If asked, I firmly agree with the given statement. In the ensuing paragraphs, I shall discuss the reasons to support my view with appropriate example.
Discussing the foremost reason to support my view, technology makes employee’s life better by escalating the efficiency of work. Nowadays all organization use the latest computer for work because the computer does user-friendly work thus employee easily understand their work and finished work without the error. For exemplify Mechanical designer uses animated software on a computer to present their adaptive design. In addition, Technology not only gives efficient work but also reduce processing which ultimately beneficial for the employer.

Furthermore, technology completes work, which is next to impossible for the human. Nowadays automation in manufacturing is more preferable then manual work by humankind. In addition, the machine can perform work in extreme condition like in the space area and high-temperature area. For instance, in space-shuttle, most of the processes performed by the machine only, because of the human are not able to work on that condition.
However, we cannot overlook the drawback of the technology, due to technology human-being are more rely on the computer or machine thus capability of individuals get reduces. For instance, Most people save contact details on a mobile phone instead of memories. If a mobile phone gets switch off then people are not able to contact their family.

To conclude, there are numerous benefits of technology such as better and efficient work done by the employee and get the job done in an inappropriate environment, which leads to the betterment of the life of the worker.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, then, thus, for instance, in addition, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4089347079 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04328080904 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577319587629 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5389138142 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.375 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0705010742292 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0268682070752 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0239348292771 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0434010807729 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249900474238 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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