Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all schools subject but others believe that they are good at or that they find the most interest. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this modern era, people believe that adolescents should focus on all school subjects, however few consider that teenagers must concentrate on subjects they are good at or that which they find most interesting. I believe that in early ages of schooling youngsters should focus on all subjects with the ones of their interest.
The main purpose of education is to meet what an adolescent wants<span class="hiddenGrammarError" pre="wants "></span> in his/her future life. To accomplish this first step is to study. In the first years it is extremely important to focus on all the subjects equally including the subjects of interest, this will help to set up a rock solid foundation which will support in structuring their future.
Once a teenager has attained the basic level of education, he/she would be in a better place to decide further in detail on the area of interest. At this juncture they can explore and can think of innovations in the subject of interest, this has been achieved due to the foundation built. The knowledge gained from the subjects are<span class="hiddenGrammarError" pre="subjects "></span> used further and later they will convert the study of interest into their desired passion.
<span class="hiddenGrammarError" pre="it "></span>It is said that a passion is accompanied with complete satisfaction and a person with shallow knowledge always struggles as they are not able to judge which way to go whether it be the area of interest or any other field as the foundation laid is not exact, this further leads to lot of dilemma in life.
Thus in my opinion youngsters should concentrate on all school subjects along with the most interest ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, thus, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42279411765 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.39936830703 2.80592935109 157% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555147058824 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.5475605798 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.5 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273971601655 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131258625054 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133409808419 0.0667982634062 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192994954879 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.157640336615 0.056905535591 277% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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