Some people believe that there should b fixed punishments for each type of crome. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Punishment has always been an integral part of judgement against crime. For committing different sorts of crimes, a group of people think that penalties should be predetermined, while the rest of the people prefer to have considerations regarding individual's situation, reasons for which they commit crimes before bringing them under punishment. In my opinion, I believe that both of these views are logical and both sides can be applicable in different circumstances.
According to some, prior setting of punishments are crucial to ensure justice and prevent further offenses. They argue about this with a view to punishing the culprits so that seeing them others can also be careful and cautious about doing an illegal and offensive activity. Moreover, they think that if the criminals do not have any fixed boundaries, they will act as their suit will, which will be extremely harmful, destructive to a society, for example, if a person knows that violating a
road signal, will pay him a devoid himself from doing so. Along with that, deliberate criminal activities can also be controlled by this method. Otherwise, offenders may not think before making a blunder, if there is no such fear of being punished.
On the other hand, other people always tend to see the criminals from Their perspectives and circumstances under which they make mistakes. Rather than being totally strict with only applying laws and rules, they believe to emphasize on humanity and empathy towards the offenders. Sometimes for example, a person may break the signal for reaching hospital to save a dying patient. In these type of cases, it will not be fair to punish him without even knowing about his urgency. Hence, there should be a kind act of understanding the motivation of and minimize the amount of penalties accordingly.
To conclude, there must be some level of punishments fixed, however this should not be rigid always. I think that a fine line must remain there between giving punishments and considering the criminals own circumstances. May be by not being totally strict, many innocents can be saved.
However, it is a matter of regret that, though self-satisfaction in a task is an inevitable thing for anyone, very few are fortunate enough to get such opportunity. Because of various causes people are sometimes forced to do any kind of duty, even if they are not pleased with it. For instance, my brother-in-law is a banker, but he does not like this at all, still he is continuing because of family pressure and for want of money to run the family. Likewise this case of example, numerous individuals have their own reasons for being involved in unattractive works, sacrificing their happiness, enjoyment and contentment. Another reason why it is not possible to be satisfied with official activities is the working environment (companies' rules, pressures, absence of flexibility). Even though most of the employers desire better quality, opportunity, due to their circumstances, they always cannot have it as they want.
To conclude, peace of mind can not be ignored in any kind of job and it is of great importance. However, not always, everyone have the chance to be contented with their jobs totally, due to some real needs and depending on situations. I strongly think that it is not unrealistic to promote more well-being. If the factors identified above are implemented, then any working condition can be improved and more workers can feel greater degrees of contenment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, thus, apart from, as to, for instance, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19620253165 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72824455987 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588607594937 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2283344309 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.466666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316782079442 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104029183869 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656770625158 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214671881621 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746206770221 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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