Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, agree that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In order to maintain peace and order, every society has laws to deter any criminal activity. Many think that every offense should have a corresponding predetermined penalty while others think that surrounding circumstances should be weighed first before a punishment can be implemented. In my opinion, although the first statement might be an effective way of punishing wrongdoers, considering all factors would be a better way of serving justice.
In the first view, implementing set penalties favor victims because of the likelihood that the criminals will receive the full weight of the law. Additionally, by removing other things that could complicate the case, trials will be shorter. For example, a murder trial that usually takes years to decide might get resolution within weeks or months. Hence, criminal courts will then have fewer backlogs and will be able to cater justice to more people.
On the other hand, examining the circumstances surrounding the case gives the offenders a chance to defend themselves. By taking into account both sides and understanding all merits, the information gathered can be used to formulate better legislation. Likewise, knowing the motivations could also lead to changes that may better the situation of the victim or their families. For example, if the motivation is aggression in school or workplace, then rules can be formulated to prevent this from happening again. Also, by weighing all factors, it is more likely to lead to a just decision that will satisfy both parties.
In summary, implementing sentences without considering all things that affect a case is a false sense of justice. Also, knowledge gain from this system will help create better laws that will protect all members of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, likewise, may, so, then, while, for example, in summary, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86822849401 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610714285714 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.7097016693 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.714285714 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166920357087 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513352332131 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568568972205 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0908762850155 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680319827856 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.