Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state.do you agree or disagree?

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Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state.do you agree or disagree?

All the people earn the money to fullfil their need.In the current time of technological advancement, one of the most pressing concerns is regarding the given topic should masses pay their earning tax to government or should save money. I completely agree with this statement ;and I shall explore the some from various aspects in upcoming paragraph the reach on conclusion
To begin with, I personally believe that it has become extremely indispensable to every individual to pay tax to the administration in order to improve the overall development of the nation such as, a country can provide well education to ta students ;can opend new education institutions in the country side areas? only because of this, a nation can be progress if there would be more educated masses.
Secondly due to the help of the native people of the country basic nessecty can be provided by the government for instance, the inhabitants who are living in under poverty line administration can provide free food, medical facilities and shelter those one who really needed, it is only possible if everyone give tax.moreover, tax play crucial role to improve the standard of infrastructure and so on.
To conclude, I pen down by saying that as we have seen that there are number of answer to this question. On balance, however, I tend to believe that paying taxes to the government are very beneficial for the development of the people; and the nation themselves

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96694214876 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89141653826 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628099173554 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 162.511965371 49.4020404114 329% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 200.333333333 106.682146367 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.3333333333 20.7667163134 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.6666666667 7.06120827912 250% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191063629349 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849395689335 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857780038359 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108981729217 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884923697116 0.056905535591 156% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 13.0946893788 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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