Some people believe that they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree?
It is well said that "When government accepts responsibility for people, then people no longer take responsiblitiy for themselves". With the rise in modernization, a man has tranformed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking bare footed in the jungles to take the first step on the moon. For instance, the given topic asserts that should residents keep all their wages or have to pay some part to government as tax? Through this essay I shall explore the dimensions of this topic through observations and examples.
On one side, there are some people who believes that we do not have to pay tax to the government because as we can see that in our country, total 70% of the people are below to the poverty line. They do not have house to live. They do not have clothes to wear and also they do not have food to eat. It is fact that, in our country, a poor becomes more poor and a rich becomes more rich. This is just because of the government. Infact government make a law in our country that a govenment employee must have to pay tax and they follow that law and pay tax to the government, then why in our country people below poverty line are more than 70%?
In the second place, when we pay tax to the
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'housed'.
Suggestion: housed
...w to the poverty line. They do not have house to live. They do not have clothes to we...
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Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...o eat. It is fact that, in our country, a poor becomes more poor and a rich becomes mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, then, well, for instance, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46017699115 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67007444043 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544247787611 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.179523751 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309900868039 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10352334201 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108923997951 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164759564659 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791055235583 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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