Some people believe that they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state Do you agree or disagree

Irrefutably, nowadays a dramatic increase is manifested in the crime rate since, some yesteryears. A group of people thinks that resident should keep all their earning and should not have business paying tax to the government .I totally disagree with this statement and this essay would shed light on the valid stand points in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with the favor of notion, there are abundant of factors behind the standpoints .Firstly, it all, they are used expanding and main ting public transport facilities such as old public transportation and replace highway road. Secondly, taxes are utilized innumerable scheme are involved medical service education scholarship .taxes are useful military service and growth of gross domestic product. It’s included and grosses item are involved good service tax. Even if you have buy automobile part tax are included their and all taxes are collecting taxes department.
According to the survey, it can be seen that the article ‘TIME OF INDIA’ tax amount are using benifical work for public transportation and making new bridges.
On the other sides, people should have to pay the taxes will beneficial themselves. Some funds are collected tax authorizing and retirement funds. The taxes are paying taking for personal enjoyment benefits government scheme. For exemplify, If you paying taxes of business resources its more benefits are with us .Takes loan facile and approval from government.
According to survey, It can noted that the fire incident are in shop malls, cinemas and that times government are helping to those who are paying taxes regularly its beneficial for owner.
Conclusion.
In the final reckoning, I do not agree with this statement all our income and paying taxes to the government as taxes are beneficial to development of people and refurbished innumerable historical monuments.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (2 votes)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 226, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ve business paying tax to the government .I totally disagree with this statement a...
^^
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... business paying tax to the government .I totally disagree with this statement an...
^
Line 2, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...there are abundant of factors behind the standpoints .Firstly, it all, they are u...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 102, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ors behind the standpoints .Firstly, it all, they are used expanding...
^^
Line 2, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Firstly
...s behind the standpoints .Firstly, it all, they are used expanding and ma...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 345, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ed medical service education scholarship .taxes are useful military service and gr...
^^
Line 4, column 312, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... resources its more benefits are with us .Takes loan facile and approval from go...
^^
Line 4, column 314, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Takes
...esources its more benefits are with us .Takes loan facile and approval from governm...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 324, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ts more benefits are with us .Takes loan facile and approval from government. Ac...
^^^
Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'note'
Suggestion: note
...overnment. According to survey, It can noted that the fire incident are in shop mal...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... can noted that the fire incident are in shop malls, cinemas and that times gover...
^^
Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'times'' or 'time's'?
Suggestion: times'; time's
...nt are in shop malls, cinemas and that times government are helping to those who are...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38095238095 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78194698457 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5726048861 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.692307692 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322341870829 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107439403305 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824641381233 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146216771815 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855501083344 0.056905535591 150% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.