Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state . Do you agree or disagree.

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Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state . Do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays , money is very important role play in our life as well as , all people have need of money . Morover , some people think that the all people pay a tax for government whereas, it is good to changes in their our country .Government is also provide a new facilities for people . I personally , disagree for this statement and my points views in this paragraph .
On the other hand , government should keep is a tax for everyone because ,the government develop a new technology . In additio , the government develop a buildings whenever , there people are work to do . Looking at the details , the people has also higer income earnings nowadays , so that's way the people pay tax to government . However ,it is good way to help a poors and increase economy for example ,nowadays , the government have avilable a tool tax and people pay tax and government use the money for the countries .
Moving towards , the government provide a many facilites for people as well as , they provide a good education for children and the government provide a medical facilites for poor people because , some people have not afforad the money for highest cost medical . Eventhough , government is aviable a new oppunities and people enjoy a number of weatlthy life style for example , government has open a new college for everyone .
In concluion , the tax is very important nowadays , beacuse , the government think for everyone so that way they tax for people and growth a country.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, well, whereas, for example, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 41.998997996 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91836734694 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72064536903 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473469387755 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8480268905 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 5.01903807615 797% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219382476124 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10594844786 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517157994201 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151349376448 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384358911089 0.056905535591 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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