Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do u agree or disagree.

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Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do u agree or disagree.

Development is today's era is of great concern ; especially for developing countries like India. In terms of development what matters is, the economic strength of not only country, but also it's residents. In current time of the advancement the most controversial issue is regarding tax payment to the state. Some people thinks they should not pay a part of their earning to the state. I completely agree with the statement and shall explore the same from various aspects in following paragraphs.

During the talk about tax payment, the question which arises is on government itself, especially in developing countries. The people despite of giving heavy taxes to government bodies are mot provided with the proper facilities; which forces them to make the opinion of, not giving taxes to state. The example which illustrate this situation can be seen commonly in everyday life; that is , The people who are below the poverty line pay taxes even they don't afford their basic necessities, but what they get in return? The answer is nothing. The governmental education bodies have no teaching staff in their schools and colleges. A recent survey conducted by Hindustan Times states that, only 5% of students are getting education from government school and colleges.

Another experience which strengthen their decision is the condition of government hospitals. The patients don't get proper attention in the hospital, which forces individuals to spend more money in private hospitals. Besides these points other facilities like transportation anf agricultural subsidies are also not available even if they pay taxes to government. A survey conducted in 2017 witnessed that, about 60% farmers committed sucide because of only one reason, that they don't get enough subsidies after paying great amount to the government.

Thus, it can be ascertained that it is a debatable issue although, I believe people who earn more than predefined amount ,as set by government should pay taxes and not for those who earn less than that amount. It should totally depends on the economic status of the individuals that they should pay tax or not.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, regarding, so, then, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22157434402 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75689508132 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562682215743 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0920327717 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.352941176 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88235294118 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320315285691 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948548864335 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119804333861 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194842649551 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733203481392 0.056905535591 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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