As a social animal each human being has the responsibility to serve their community without expecting any reward. There are few people who believe that involving in community activities which will not pay any money must be made a compulsory part of the school carriculum. But, i think charity works , improving neighbourhood, and teaching sports activities to our younger children should be something done free of cost with our full interest than from some external forces. This essay will go through both parts in details.
On the one hand, compulsory community works in schools will give students an exposure to the society and surroundings which may not happened in their life in the past. Because there are a lot of people in our neighbourhood who lacks money and other basic needs in life, and waiting for helping hands. Money has made many bright and able students to step back from higher education and different types of sports activities. So by participating in such activities atleast once, as a compulsory move will help many needy poeple.
On the otherhand, doing charity works and free services to the society voluntarily without any compulsion from school or other individuals actually comes deeply from our heart and so will remain forever. I remember an organisation called NSS in my higher secondary schools where students are compelled to join. As a part of it, I had participated in many cleaning and construction programs free of cost. But, once i left the school i left that good behaviour also.And i realised later that compulsion from the school was the stimuli for finding times for such activities.
In conclusion, charity works are something schools should entertain and build up among students, though it should never be a compulsion. In my opinion community activities which someone do by himself and enjoy to fullest only can keep up it throughout the life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, second, so, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06709265176 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79558341392 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581469648562 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0077145554 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.285714286 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264985750523 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774552080582 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536141253242 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148759999128 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449848393715 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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