It is a popular view that keeping a completely vegetarian diet is the best for one’s health. Simultaneously, others strongly disagree with it. My view tend to agree with the latter one.
It is agreeable that in some cases following a vegetarian diet is good for one’s health. Like for obese middle age adults, fresh vegetables and the absence of processed meat in a vegetarian diet could help to keep blood sugar and body fat down. Likewise, the same goes for some women who thinks themselves aging too fast, as some vegetables contain anti-dioxide, a substance which helps to mitigate the aging of cells, vegetarian diet surly is a good choice for them.
However, any diet saw as perfect by some is not always good for the others, simply because there are both physical and mental differences between people. Take an extreme case for example, vegan’s diet, which even excludes dairy product like milk and cheese as vegan is the extreme type of vegetarian, is definitely not reasonably healthy for babies since we know they are fed with milk. Even more generally, people who are in special health condition probably need to eat some animal product to obtain certain substances contained in them. Obviously, vegetarian diet is not for everyone and certainly not the best diet whatsoever.
Besides, apart from health reasons, the choice of diet is a personal choice no matter vegetarian or meat lover. Just like some people favors white whist some prefer black. How could a force diet on anyone is the “best” when someone does not enjoy it at all? From this perspective, I am against the first view.
In conclusion, I think vegetarian diet may be the best choice for some, but it is definitely the best for anyone considering the differences between people, and it is a matter of personal taste.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 114, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'considers'.
Suggestion: considers
...ut it is definitely the best for anyone considering the differences between people, and it ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, likewise, may, so, apart from, for example, i think, in conclusion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97068403909 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7351169113 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579804560261 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7607329339 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.733333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373046221547 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13613000092 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664642538022 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217949170837 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230534539011 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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