Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on society. Others deny that these have any significant influence on people's behavior. What is your opinion?
Undoubtedly, watching television and electronic games is thought by many pose a big threat to mankind toward violence. Although, some strata of society subscribe to belive that , following such practice brings scads of refinements in human’s behavior , yet my perspectives are wholeheraty in synchronization of this notion.
There is not even iota of suspicion, TV and video games act as catalyst to escalate juvenile delinquency . To initiate , adolescents are more vulnerable to kill there leisure time by pursing these activities . Owing to this, they are likely to adopt atrocities and brutalities in real life which are being shown via TV and video games.Thus, having such phenomena inflict a heavy damage to society as well as young adults. One more reason cannot be given a nelson’s eye is that, several violent hero’s of Tv shows are role modal of youth, in other words they try to imitate their behavoiur without judging whether it is wrong or right . Hence, these actives are fountains head to take a heavy toll on junvillne.
Probing further, another reason cannot be put on back burner is that, youngster are likely to distract from their aims and motives as some becomes addicted to watch shows and playing on electronic gadgets which further leads to push them away from study. As a consequences , these are of crucial factors to make society more hostile by having such activities .
In conclusion, despite computer made games and Television is carries a great significance , I belive that violet factor of these approach cannot be ignored which further leads to damage of civilization
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- Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on society. Others deny that these have any significant influence on people's behavior. What is your opinion? 73
- Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on society. Others deny that these have any significant influence on people's behavior. What is your opinion? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, thus, well, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89917068165 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638461538462 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.9176872953 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.5 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126368054724 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493436924516 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361485084505 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824458862077 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392559445031 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.