Some people believe that visitors to other countries follow local customs and behaviour.Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Tourism is not only economic also social bridge between the countries from all over the world.Also,it is one of the significant basic dynamic and valuable income source for many countries.People thinking tourists implement traditions,cultural activities and lifestyles of visited countries defend it has many advantages.On the other hand,advocates believe that host country should have tolerance tourist’s behaviours,traditions,customs and cultures.In the first part of my essay will be the point of view believes visitors should try to obey host country’s traditions and culture,then the idea of host country should have tolerance and respect tourist’s habits and culture and finally ı will concluded with my point of view about this topic.
Firstly,to maintain one country’s countinual lifestyle and order, visitors should adapt visited country’s lifestyle and culture.It has many advantages to learn different cultures deeply.
Visitors find a chance to learn new cultural values,traditional music,food,customs,festivals and event with experimenting them.For instance,tourists coming to Arvin in Turkey can learn a traditional dance named Haley from local people with experimenting them.Furthermore,they may also learn unconsciously local people’s food culture,thoughts and their hospitality when talking and spending time with them.Another advantage is that, activities doing to understand visited country’s culture create cultural interaction.For example,visitor attending Oktoberfest in Germany with wearing traditional costume not only meet new people,also feels close himself to their culture and grow willing to mention his country and culture also.
Secondly,advocates believe that host country should have tolerance for visitor’s traditions and it has more advantages.If host country respond visitors habits and tolerates some mistakes,visitors can feel relax and it may be a key reason to visit same place again.Moreover,visited country would be increased it’s income.If an example should be given,In Turkey there are many Chinese and Indıan restaurants where tourists can easily find their local foods and feel like their home.
According to my opinion, first idea can be more beneficial to understand host country’s culture widely and keeping order of visited country since in the second idea, ability of behaving whatever tourists they want can disrupt to social order.I believe that the best way to learn something is experimenting.If someone wants to understand one culture deeply, efficient way for his can be experimenting,respecting to other people and trying to learn new culture for a best interaction between cultures.Thanks to that way,local people welcome visitors again and teach more. More sharing means also being world citizen more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2432.0 1615.20841683 151% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 6.14141414141 5.12529762239 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.03843702119 2.80592935109 144% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54797979798 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 739.8 506.74238477 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 66.0 20.2975951904 325% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 263.68836826 49.4020404114 534% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 405.333333333 106.682146367 380% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.0 20.7667163134 318% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.5 7.06120827912 319% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 5.01903807615 757% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277527798976 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143493761489 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773875661635 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169279052366 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485503718107 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.5 13.0946893788 309% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -20.89 50.2224549098 -42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.6 11.3001002004 288% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 19.22 12.4159519038 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.38 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 64.0 9.78957915832 654% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.4 10.1190380762 281% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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