Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Tourism has immerged over the years and has attracted a lot of investment as well. But there are a lot of debates regarding conflicts that arise when tourist enter certain countries. Although some state that tourists should follow the customs of the host country while others believe that they should be welcome different cultures. This essay will focus on both the views.
The first group believes that host country should welcome different culture is suitable. Not all have the privileges to travel and explore the world around them. When visitors travel to a different country they carry with them their culture. Welcoming them will only create opportunities for those deprived of this opportunity due to of lack or finances etc, to learn and understand how people from far corners of the world live well as enable the visitors to learn the cultures and lifestyles of the particular country visited. Welcoming other cultures not only helps in understanding culters of other countries but this act open doors for various opportunities for setting up international business as well as foreign trades. For instance, In various countries such as the United States of America, Britan we can see a large number of foreign companies being set up carrying out their businesses. This, in turn, creates opportunities for employment for the people of the host country.
However, the others argues that visitors should follow the customs of host country cannot be ignored. Following the customs a particular will aid the visitors in understanding their culture better. They should be promoted too and a nation can encourage visitors to follow the local customs; however, in my opinion, imposing them on a visitor is unwarranted. Visitors who follow the local customs also benefit. They have better chances of blending themselves with the local community. They also enjoy greater degree of acceptance.
To conclude, a host country should always welcome diverse people with diverse cultures from all over the world; however, this should not be at the expense of the local culture.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...avel and explore the world around them. When visitors travel to a different country ...
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Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, regarding, so, well, while, as for, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21791044776 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64817678342 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519402985075 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.851300175 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1111111111 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6111111111 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368831927665 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120102716697 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116201141312 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236338205915 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285599276903 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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