under the influence of time many aspects changes has taken place,be it in social,human-lifestyle and wildlife etc.With the passage of time, human population spiked day by day.hence, to being this deforestion also increased.Look at all this,government has establish few zoos for the animals.But few masses considerd that protecting house for animals are only wastage of money.In contrast,some think that its very lucrative for the wildlife.I will discuss both views and give my opinion before reaching at valid conclusion.
To Commence With ,there are plethora of reasons zoos are very momentous for the animals.Firstly ,Human beings built an enormous industries in the land.Hence,they are prolifirate the road and factories rapidly.It is a alarming rate for the animals becouse they cut the trees continusally.That's why zoos are very benificial for the wildlife.Its like a boon for them which given by the government.In Addition, ample animals suffring from tremendous deseases.Therefore, Their Health has been always deteriorate.However, judiciary recruit well educated doctors in the zoos. Whom help to prevent the harmful deseases and give them to proper treatment as they require.
On the flip Site,there are some negative effects of this phenomenon which cannot be overloked. Some zoos has little sphere therefore animals cannot get same enviournment which already have at forests.Though, all immenties are available at the zoos but its like a prison for the animals.Hence, they feel like not a autonomous.Additionally, ampel folks and off-spring prefer to see animals species at the zoos.Therefore, They spend huge amount before enter the zoos becouse some zoos has conditions to being this. its totally like a prodigal money.
According to my percaption, Zoos are very essential for the animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61313868613 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.65440564119 2.80592935109 130% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638686131387 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 217.637125434 49.4020404114 441% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 219.714285714 106.682146367 206% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.1428571429 20.7667163134 188% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 5.01903807615 737% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131515426406 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599408142135 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418745801107 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870385721657 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250608163826 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.6 13.0946893788 188% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 14.97 50.2224549098 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.9 11.3001002004 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.85 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.7 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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