Some people choose to eat no fish or meat. They believe that this is not better for your own health but also benefits the world as whole.
Discuss these view and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, many people avoid to eat fish or meat from their daily meal. They think that it is not only bad for health but also very much dangerous for the planet. Though meat and fish are high source of protein but I totally agree with this statement. In this essay I will discuss this topic in my point of view.
First of all, it is undisputed that fruits and vegetables is very much essential for our health. In addition, it keeps to fit our body. Healthy body is very much important for leading a happy life. Some people totally avoid meats and fishes from his diet because meats and fishes create a number of diseases . Peoples suffer from many problem for eating red meat which is contain high cholesterol and fat. Cholesterol makes many problems in body as well as it is the main cause of heart diseases and obesity. On the other hand, fruits and vegetables contain a lot of vitamins and minerals which is needed for our body. Sometimes meat and fish is the one of the main reason of cancer. Furthermore, it is proved that meats and fishes has antibiotic which is very much danger for people's health.
Moreover, all types of sources for meat and fish are very much important for balance eco-system. People destroy our eco-system by over fishing and hunting animals as well and some fishes are extinct now. Therefor, if we avoid fish and meat from our daily meal, we can easily prevent those extinct species.
In conclusion, it is not possible to get off fully fishes and meats from our diet but we can reduce the consumption and we can add more fruits and vegetables in our meal which will be good for our sound body as well as planet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid eating'.
Suggestion: avoid eating
Nowadays, many people avoid to eat fish or meat from their daily meal. The...
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Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'keeps fitting'.
Suggestion: keeps fitting
...sential for our health. In addition, it keeps to fit our body. Healthy body is very much imp...
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Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s and fishes create a number of diseases . Peoples suffer from many problem for ea...
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Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'many problems'.
Suggestion: many problems
...umber of diseases . Peoples suffer from many problem for eating red meat which is contain hi...
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Line 3, column 373, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'contained'.
Suggestion: contained
...ny problem for eating red meat which is contain high cholesterol and fat. Cholesterol m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53355704698 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26254118804 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503355704698 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5607865072 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4705882353 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5294117647 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41176470588 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213774637134 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832198857817 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507553211191 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147144362158 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752524104435 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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