Some people claim that the government should provide free health care. Others think that the government will not provide the most innovative methods of treatment and it's better to invest those funds in education and culture.
What is your opinion?
Country development is a place of strong education, culture and health. Government is willing to invest in education and always care about human health. I agree this view, education and health are two aspects that should go together.
Health is the origin of everything. Then we have a health, we can do things we like, fulfill our dreams and rapidly accomplish the goals.Moreover, people are not sick, they will work with higher productivity and it is important that people can be create to support their lives. From that the economy will be more and more development. So the government should provide free health care for citizens. For example, If a member family is ill, other members of the family will be leave their job to look after them. Many houdehold have the same status, the economic will be lag.
Health, education and culture should develop together. A country has a large larbo source without professional qualifications. Meanwhile, the work will be difficult to complete lead to economic slowdown. People’ quality of life may deteriorate. However, a place will grow more other areas with human have strong energy and high level. So the government should balance investment in health and education. For example, Farmers are a good health but they have not knowlwdge of agriculture. They will not product high quality products.
In conclusion, health and education are two basic needs of very citizen. These two things are provided by the government for free to its citizens, then acountry will get strong development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...dreams and rapidly accomplish the goals.Moreover, people are not sick, they will work wi...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1626984127 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79519201264 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551587301587 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9560104824 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.4736842105 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2631578947 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31578947368 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261598327133 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897768239228 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878393312409 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17701126102 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213071768216 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.76 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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