In recent years , householdsl waste are increasing day by day with the increasing population in big cities . unfortunately , nobody was taking responsibility or a single step to clean this waste . So , to solve this problem many people think that the government should pass a legal law to clean up this waste as people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled
In my opinion governments should imposed some laws related to garbage whereas along with that government should organise some educational programs to educate people about it in brief. In addition , governments should put some heavy fines on not following the laws this will stop people to throw things here and there , moreover , it will increase the rate of recycling leading to minimum amount of waste . Even , they can ensure a team which will make sure that the waste was recycled correctly , beside , it will also take care that the recyclables are put in correct bins and as well as bins are always in the right place , For example , Singapore has introduced law asking people to recycle their household waste otherwise there is extremely heavy fine the loss is brought an unpredictable result with 60% of waste has produced every year
On the other hand education of treating waste in school only will make the process of recycling well-known and valuable as well . Laws are not only the outcomes . If teachers teaching to children that how to treat waste , where and why to recycle their waste . Sooner , people will improve the recycling process
To sum up, with this laws people develop a sense of recycling their waste properly , if the laws are strict . Furthermore, school should have a great impact on children that how important are their actions related to recycling process
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, for example, in addition, in brief, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98305084746 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59290596674 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542372881356 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 160.649376663 49.4020404114 325% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 163.333333333 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.7777777778 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.8888888889 7.06120827912 225% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.45827117225 0.244688304435 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183800541272 0.084324248473 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979452356806 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290476494989 0.151304729494 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034217720983 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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