One of the most pressing issues we face as a society is waste management. It is unfortunate that not enough of our waste is recycled. There are some individuals who believe that allowing recycling to become law would increase its practice. I fully agree with the above opinion. In this essay, I will explain why making recycling a legal requirement would deter individuals from mismanaging waste and bring awareness to the issue.
To begin, putting a law on recycling would deter others from breaking the law for fear of being prosecuted. When the government attaches a punishment to improper waste management such as either paying a substantial fine or community service, it would force most to adjust to this new way of life. Hence providing a deterrent in the form of punishment would help most individuals conform to recycling.
It would create awareness of the need to recycle. When the government places emphasis on recycling, due to its resources, many people will become aware of the need to recycle. Through the use of local tv stations, newspapers, and many other forms of communication, which are easily accessible to the government, they are able to reach a wide range of individuals. Even though this can be done by private agencies, it would take more time and money. Thus, allowing the government to take control of the problem of recycling would make accessibility to the different ways one can recycle easily.
In conclusion, the issue of recycling is an important one. I believe when strict laws are placed on it and information on why and how it should be done is made available, it would greatly boost its usage.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...how it should be done is made available, it would greatly boost its usage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, thus, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92779783394 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84896792326 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57761732852 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.745362218 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86666666667 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270095382817 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855992796677 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073316978009 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155347076644 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710933416372 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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