Some people claim that public museums and art allergies will not be needed because people can see historical objects and worksk of art using a computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the development of advanced technology, people easily view works of art and artifacts through computers. I believe that public museums and art exhibitions still play a vital role in the culture of a particular nation.
On the one hand, various reasons explained visiting museums and art galleries through Internet can replace traveling to these places. The first reason is that visitors see historically valuable antiques and well-made items without traveling. Various websites are equipped with adequate information about art, sculptures with realistic images, and catchy sounds. Enjoying museums and art galleries online also is helpful in some unforeseen situations. For instance, with the spread of Covid 19, it is hard to go to museums to research, and complete assignments, so they only need to have a smartphone and search for all information in these areas.
On the other hand, I still believe that exhibition rooms play a vital role in our lives. Firstly, the museum is a symbol and considered a cultural identity because the museum is a store of local arts and artifacts that can only be found in your area. As a result, the museum contributes to the cultural diversity of a nation. Nevertheless, it is the best place to preserve ancient documentaries and art preservation. Therefore, when an artifact is conserved to retain its current condition, it preserves the truth of the historical story for generations to come. Finally, educating the young generation about how our nations, communities, and cultures formed over a period of history. Museum makes them more aware and worships all the past achievements.
In conclusion, the online studio cannot replace the presence of museums and galleries. For that reason, I disagree with the view given.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...and worships all the past achievements. In conclusion, the online studio cannot ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24028268551 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93053677661 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593639575972 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9061276108 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6875 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8125 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214504653869 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643908315875 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489925715111 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122327838935 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440991575396 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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