Some people claim that traditional games had more benefits for children than modern ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Playing games are fruitful for the teenagers as children can reveal stress from their minds by playing games. In this day and age, it is a highly debatable concern. Some people advocate that present games has more number of positive outcomes as against to conventional games especially for young ones. This essay would shed light on views in the upcoming paragraphs of this notion.
To commence with, there are manifold factors why the ongoing games should by played by
the offsprings. First and foremost, while playing these modern games it helps an individual to empower their brain- based skills. To demonstrate, games such as big brain academy, such kind of games force the teenagers to come up with some innovative ideas to pass on the given missions; therefore, a child easily able to strengthen their mental capabilities. Moreover, the another considerable point is that, the advanced games provide phenomenal opportunities to the children to enhance their academic performance. It can be explained as, if modern games are played by child, an individual can not only increase their calculation skills but also broaden the horizon of knowledge by playing puzzling games for instance, word search and sudoku. As a consequence, a user can enhance their academic grades ; however, the outdated games only help the kid to stay fit and fine.
Further emphasizing on my views. Initially, the games of today, provide better platform to talented as well as hardworking sports person to present their skills on international level on the behalf of their potential. Hence, a player can earn their identify along with financial assistance in regards to their playing performance. Subsequently, modern games enables a pearson to cope with various challenging circumstances by preparing him mentally and physically as well. Thus, people can easily sort out any trouble, and become self independent.
To recapitulate, although traditional games have their own significance, I believe that benefits of modern games are much more as compared outdated games.
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| 2020-04-26 | Justin | 82 | view |
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19076923077 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75738320336 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575384615385 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 325.0 20.2975951904 1601% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1687.0 106.682146367 1581% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 325.0 20.7667163134 1565% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 137.0 7.06120827912 1940% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191060628874 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191060628874 0.084324248473 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122522535292 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697645534361 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 165.5 13.0946893788 1264% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -258.4 50.2224549098 -515% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 130.0 11.3001002004 1150% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.3 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.98 8.58950901804 279% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 132.0 10.1190380762 1304% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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