SOME PEOPLE CONSIDER PRICE AS MOST IMPORTANT THING TO THINK ABOUT WHEN BUYING PRODUCT SUCH AS CELL PHONE OR SERVICE (EX, medical treatment)
Do you agree or disagree with the given statement?
First of all, these days, prices in all the sectors have been accelerated due to dearness and fastest growing economy of the nations. But in my point of view, in the time of buying products, customers do emphasize about prices and quality of products whether it could be Medical treatment, educational service or hotel service. Because this is very much essential for them, in this modern era, they have many financial accountabilities to accomplish for their children and family. So they forever put stress on the prices of the products or service. It is clearly visible from the society of mankind that numerous people go behind expensive things or service because of sterling level of service and product.
Second of all, there are growing numbers of thing which are sold at the higher price because of their very good quality. For instance, Medical vaccines for kids and small children are sold with high financial cost because they are painless vaccines that are immensely comfortable as well as tolerable for them that is why a group of people like to pay high price for many healthier purposes, now a days, prices are displayed on the products in the shopping malls and small stalls where people from meddle class and lower class come to buy products or groceries. And at these places, people from all the classes can make decision about buying things easily and get sometimes better discount on shopping deal.
Thirdly, prices are quite important for all of us, sometimes cheaper products or services cannot satisfy us as result, we may have to buy things once again with high rate, so proper care for shopping has to well taken by responsible consumers and the reasons for high values of products or services should be clearly read out and well understood by them. Because cheaper products never can be good, sustainable and durable for us. So prices should be considered well enough by the customers.
To sum up, in my point of view, there should be strong control of government over some life daily oriented products thus a fair amount of people can easily afford and spend their life happily. However prices should be enhanced as per the qualitative service or products to customers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
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Suggestion: a day; days
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Suggestion: However,
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Suggestion:
...ative service or products to customers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, third, thirdly, thus, well, as to, for instance, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2187.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 445.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91460674157 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49176297365 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496629213483 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 672.3 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.527013031 49.4020404114 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.6875 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8125 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231374446113 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856612519457 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047262441059 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140359284746 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270799409441 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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