It is true that the proliferation of science and medicine has become a foremost boon for the old age people in this modern scenario. Thus, the ratio of them is escalating swiftly almost throughout the world. This vogue has both positive and negative effects, which are yet to be discussed in the following paragraphs.
The presence of an old age people seems to be effective in certain ways in this contemporary world. Firstly, older people tend to have good knowledge in terms of classical times, and this understanding has immense significance for young once as they learn how the significant things are to be managed in their life with full of efficiency. Secondly, young people are busy in their works, and therefore, they do not have time to spend with their kids; meanwhile, older people become the companion for those kids in order to make them jovial.
Though older people have some positive effects, yet the negatives that come along old age cannot be overlooked, the first and foremost is expenditure of money as they put the community and high authority under financial pressure , it is evident that the diseases engulf them in this old age period ; consequently, they require large sums of money for curing the diseases. Moreover, having taken a retirement, they join the companies for working, so this recruitment leads to fewer opportunities for youngsters; in the meantime, they have to face troubles due to unemployment.
In conclusion, given the significance of an old age people, they can never be termed negative in this contemporary world; hence, the government is meant to pinpoint effective ways for the smooth running of society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... high authority under financial pressure , it is evident that the diseases engulf ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04379562044 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83729660908 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56204379562 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.3712915268 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.555555556 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4444444444 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2222222222 7.06120827912 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0853453905624 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430308529157 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285450913324 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0604572148716 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0141903783901 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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