No doubt, global warming has become a grievously issue in all over the world and it is escalating day by day due to some divergent causes. Therefore, people are having to face so many problems in their daily life but this problem can be easily solved by government and individuals with great condolences .So some measures and the reasons of this problem will be initiated in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, there are many causes of global warming .Firstly, industrial growth has increased the level of harmful gases in atmosphere like; carbon dioxide and carbon monoxide. Moreover, the fossil fuels are being used by growing number of population to drive their cars ,buses and public transports so these sources of travelling pollute the atmosphere with smog. However, burning domestic waste and deforestation both are the major causes to enhance the level of global warming because without forests the greenhouse gas cannot be absorbed .
Further more, government should conserve the forest area by implementing strict rules as well as every individual has strict need to preserve more trees around them to control the level of gases and maintain ecosystem. In addition, government must find some alternative ways to reduce the dependency on fossil fuels as well as some campaigns should be started by government to use the solar cells in the field of industries and transportation.
To conclude, it is very obligatory for an every civilian and government to contribute together for saving the environment because it is a precious gift given by god to human beings to live a long healthy life on earth
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in addition, no doubt, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09811320755 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76025290218 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618867924528 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.9022030995 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.875 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.125 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.125 7.06120827912 200% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178659639663 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728797778443 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057523969207 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907585494294 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608543814414 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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