There is no denying the fact the phenomenon of some people ponder that individual live in present and should not take a tension about the future. Although, many people believe that future planning to be a waste of time is a ubiquitous, across the globe due to its a paramount importanant. In my opinion I agree with the given statement , which will be elaborated in upcoming paragraph.
To begin with, there are many benefits of thinking in advance about the future and planning are as follows: Out of all, the one to prove strongest point that, nowadays advance planning and thinking are very helpful in masses future life in many ways . To elaborated the, when all people should do planning in advance and thinking about their future for achieve to success , so they can easily reach success.For instance, famous cricketer Mahendra Singh Dhoni , three year ago planned to win the 2011 world cup and he has succeed in that as well. Apart from the,people who want to be something in life such as doctor, engineer businessman, scientist etc.They need to plan for it in advance ,so that they can achieve a goal. For example, APJ Abdul Kalam thought at a young age that I would make a missile and he has been successful in this work. In addition, the fact that all people should advance thinking about our future plan is also logical.
On the contrary, some people counter claim the mantioned support. The foremost arguments they do is many people think that planning for the future is very stressful and he takes away people's joy , so their living in the present gives them happy and contented, but adoption of this habit bring them problem in the future so should not be adopted.
To conclude , without any doubt, finally commented that for all people it is necessary to advance thinking and planning about their future for getting achievements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79245283019 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50548096026 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556603773585 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.0320884982 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.545454545 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9090909091 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7272727273 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.46804361668 0.244688304435 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183920003566 0.084324248473 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854739676409 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298803003648 0.151304729494 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338958975994 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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