some people do not agree with government spending fund on art and cuture, others think that it may give benefitial on population and cuture.discuss both view and give opinion
the act of the government spending more money to enhance art and culture is now causing controversial. some think it may give momentum for the development for the country while others argure this might lead to none. Personally, i would go with the opinion that the fund put in supporting these aspects will provide us advantages to boost economy. To make clear, i will analyze both two views:
Firstly, people disagree with the policy because it may be reason for raising taxes cuz all money to make this policy comes to reality are taken from state budget which made from resident taxes. Moreover, they find it is useless while the piority for devepoping is to focus on nation economic, rather than traditional values.
On the contrast, this policy will be primary tool in our wat to preserve cutural values, therefore allow the evolution of industrial, especially services.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, may, moreover, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 733.0 1615.20841683 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 147.0 315.596192385 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98639455782 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56820515669 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.727891156463 0.561755894193 130% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 506.74238477 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.328536922 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.166666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156172686553 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682242253496 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572131201546 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880513004469 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951017931944 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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