Some people enjoy living in vertical cities while others prefer horizontal cities.
Discuss both view and give your opinion.
The issue of whether it is more enjoyable to settle in low-rise or high-rise buildings remains a source of controversy. While there is a strong case for the former view, I am more inclined to the latter.
Those in favour of low-rise structures would state their main reasons as follows. The first and foremost explanation would be that these structures provide people with more open space to pursue their interests. For instance, private houses often include a own garden where people, especially the elderly, can do gardening or raise pets, which might benefit their mental health. Moreover, it is also believed that city dwellers would easily find escape routes in case of emergency. When in a fire or other dangerous circumstances, they can get out of their homes and save themselves, or even others’ lives.
I would advocate with those who contend that high-rise structures have three advantages. First of all, it is more secure to live in an apartment. This is the result of a high-tech security system monitoring the whole building, which can also be considered as a deterrent against burglars. Therefore, security will be fortified and residents will feel safer. Another noticeable benefit of living in high-rise buildings is that they provide people greater convenience. Since these high-rising complexes include a wide range of facilities such as supermarket or school, it is possible for people to get around to shop, entertain and even study within walking distance. Finally, as many households share the same land area, we will save a great deal of space so that land resources can be allocated for infrastruture and public facilities such as health centers or schools.
In conclusion, although it is true that a horizontal city has enormous benefits, I am more inclined to complex structures because of their convenience and practicality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... instance, private houses often include a own garden where people, especially the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20598006645 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88215123315 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594684385382 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0481554665 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.466666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0870827769922 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0307916315872 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295245816283 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0583199752883 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0135632849714 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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