Some people fail in school but end up being successful in life.
Why do you think that is?
What is the most important thing to be successful in like?
The definition of success varies across a wide spectrum and although the school system describes people with good grades as successful, there is no correlation between life achievements and school success. Although the school might prepare a person to tackle real-life problems, however, in most circumstances, a person needs to learn how to overcome obstacles in life to be successful.
I think most education systems focus on knowledge based education rather than critical thinking ability and analytical skills. Even though a wide number of schools often market themselves to develop these competencies through innovative learning and teaching methods, most of these institutions fail to do so. In addition to this, school is a well-structured environment where there is a certain pattern about how everything happens. As an example, the syllabus is known and the question comes with a certain repeated cycle. In contrast, real life is uncertain. I think this is the number one reason why merit listed students often fail in work life and vice versa.
What do I think is the number one reason behind making a person successful in life? Is it grit, resilience or even mental aptitude? Well I think before one becomes the master in the world, he must learn about his own self. For example, Socrates came up with the quotation, "Know thyself", and it can be deduced that everyone's success lies within themselves. This is the reason why most people often fail and even if they seem financially competent or have a high status, they might not believe in their own selves and feel internally unhappy.
In a nutshell, the purpose of life is to know your inner talents and do the best you can to become what you can. This need and the achievement or self development is success. Now if a person feels success from the inside, there is no one in the world who can argue against this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, for example, i think, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98427672956 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78096431286 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578616352201 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3079845841 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0625 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3125 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333510889775 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924637851578 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635633268409 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193018500153 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383992447787 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.