Some people fear that technology is gradually taking over control of our lives, while others think that it has led to many positive developments in all aspects of their lives.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
While some people hold the attitude that technology seems to be shaping and directing our lives, the others maintain that it has brought considerable benefits to the society in different ways. From my perspective, I am more inclined to the former.
On the one hand, opponents of the view that technology advancements have casted dazzling light on the world. In terms of economy, the presence of cutting-edge technological innovations would be a great power to boost work productivity, enabling high profits. For instance, technology appears to be of great assistance to get difficult tasks done in several rural factories where workers might struggle to meet basic needs. With technology as our medium, people gain better access to a reservoir of information, which helps broaden their horizons as regards health and science. Along with that, cyberspace has been flattening the world in a way that people could connect to each other and keep themselves informed regardless of geographical locations.
On the other hand, it seems to me that technology has been extending beyond the boundaries that people could not understand. The first and foremost explanation would be that technology has evolved to an extent that the number of machines and robots have been rising on an unprecedented scale. The utility of artificial intelligence in society also means less involvement of human beings in such activities. To use a common example of this practice, the roles of manual workforce are being replaced by banks of assembly chains in manufactories. Another reason would lie in the fact that new technologies are not merely augmenting our abilities. Having said that, people’s skills and intelligence might be curtailed to develop because they are not given any chances to put them into practice.
All things considered, I would reaffirm that technologies, which are regarded as extensions of ourselves in frameworks of knowledge and action, could not completely displace human's roles in daily routine. Therefore, people would be better off using them effectively in such tasks to yield expected outcomes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, therefore, while, as regards, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32930513595 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94856928744 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619335347432 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.528719447 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.6 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121599018304 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400592945064 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343919632322 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738882017189 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289638349781 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.