Some people feel that children must attend school between the age of 5 and 16. Some believe that the age at which children must start attending school should be raised to 6 or probably even more than that.
It is mandatory for every child to attend school because it is the place where they get exposed to the contemporary world for the first time after spending some valuable time with their parents. Some people feel that children must attend school between the age of 5 and 16. However, I strongly believe that the age at which children must start attending school should be raised to 6 or probably even more than that. Illustrating my points of view help me describe them in detail.
5 years is the age at which children are supposed to play and they hardly have any idea about the outer world. If they start attending school from such early age there are chances that they might end up without being closely attached to their parents as they don’t have enough time to spend with their parents. They are also prone to peer pressures because of the lack of proper decision making skills.
As mentioned in the first passage, on the other hand, if children start attending school from the age of 6 or more than that, they can spend some quality time with their parents during which they will be taught what is wrong and what is right. They can also learn more about their family and society which they will not be able to understand at the age less than that. Also major part of their teenage will be spent in school learning with friends and other classmates.
Therefore, I strongly recommend that the age at which children must start attending school should be raised to 6 or 7 because of the advantages they have doing so.
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- Some people feel that children must attend school between the age of 5 and 16. Some believe that the age at which children must start attending school should be raised to 6 or probably even more than that. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 370, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...o understand at the age less than that. Also major part of their teenage will be spe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60583941606 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20291680573 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503649635036 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7760278146 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.727272727 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.502669931526 0.244688304435 205% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.242847127999 0.084324248473 288% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.242400103436 0.0667982634062 363% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.361140732636 0.151304729494 239% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.178822629956 0.056905535591 314% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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