Some people feel that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others feel that the circumstances of an offence should be taken into account when deciding on a punishment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In this Era ,crime it has been increasing because there are plethora of gadgets available for committing offence. Some human beings receive that, there should be proper retribution for each types of compensation, however, others ponder that, Circumstance of each crime ought to be taken into account , which considering on penalty for any culprits. I will discuss both the view and give my opinion.
On one hand, in jeopardising days, crucial decision has been taken by Prime Minister of India - lockdown, in during lockdown crime rates are declining vis -a` -vis previous time. Majority of people claim that punishment ought to be similar for any types of compensation. Those who have done small crime : steal any things; say lie for money and committing crime related love and family. Moreover, those who have done murder hacking an account and kidnapping for them, punishment would be same like capital punishment and death penalty .other would see them and stop themselves commit crime that the reason everyone's takes same penalty by government. For an example, Gulf countries those who are doing any crime ,they have been giving similar nemesis any culprits also they give penalty like cut the body part of culprit in market.
On other hand, people want to live luxurious life so they have not much money, nevertheless, they watch big dreams and mimic like billionaire as well as celebrity, they can not fulfill their dreams. Because of that, they commit offence for their needs . Many people considered that, punishment are different for misdemeanor because they ought to not give death penalty, those who commit a small crime, they can give a one more chance to them, start new career after small punishment . for an example ,India is the country where written every punishment for different offence also they consider that, they can live 100 criminals but innocent never get penalty also they give one more chance them the start new life, due to that, crime rate has been decreasing in India.
In my opinion, any government ought to have rules for various compensation. They would not give small penalty every criminals, also they would not only small punishment but also give chance to change their selves.
To conclude, criminals commit crime for money respect and mitigate family problems, many people say that government give same penalty in every culprit. However others recommended that they give different fate or various crime also give one chance to change their life and live respectively .
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2111.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13625304136 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48247890091 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513381995134 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 662.4 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.2548652675 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.9375 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6875 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272952095945 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10679286561 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791289996728 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174502648076 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10476155851 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.