Some people find living in the country enjoyable and relaxing, whereas others would not like to live in the country and prefer living in the big city
In the present age, most of people have passionated with living in the suburb due to exhilaration, others have not keen on living at the countryside than the massive city.
To start with the advantage of being in the country is that the fresh air. It is means that the atmosphere at there is spotless and certainly not contaminated like the air in the city which is polluted by amount of emission in factory and transportation. For instance, you will fascinated with the air every morning and it likely provide you energy to start working. Another crucial benefit when you live at there is that you would feel heartwarming and relaxing. The reason is that people in the countryside is very friendly and always cautious actively with each neighborhood. A good example is they usually share fresh food morally to their friend, neighbor and have the time to talk therefore you would not feel lonely and few isolated like in the busy city.
On the other hand, living in country also disadvantage. One of significant downside is that you have been constrained of devoloping in your career. In other words, you may not get a high-paying job as working in the city. A case in point is most of doctor work at the Ho Chi Minh have been paid higher salary than doctor in the suburb. Addition, in the city has a lot of entertainment which is loved with active and extroverted person such as nightclub, bar so on and definitely there is rare in the country.
To sum up, having looked both sides in the detail, it is clear that there are advantage and disadvantage of living in the country. In my opinion, with a energic person I find drawbacks outweigh benefits. Nevertheless, atmosphere in suburb makes people relaxing but I think living in the city more exiting and satisfied with the occupation and active lifestyle at there.
- we can not help everyone in the world that needs help so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
- we can not help everyone in the world that needs help so we should be only concerned with our own communities and countries To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 53
- Some people find living in the country enjoyable and relaxing whereas others would not like to live in the country and prefer living in the big city 64
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
In the present age, most of people have passionated with living in the sub...
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Line 2, column 278, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'fascinate'
Suggestion: fascinate
... transportation. For instance, you will fascinated with the air every morning and it likel...
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Line 2, column 330, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
...ith the air every morning and it likely provide you energy to start working. Another cr...
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Line 4, column 151, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ing in the country. In my opinion, with a energic person I find drawbacks outweig...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, for instance, i think, in fact, such as, in my opinion, in other words, to start with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70532915361 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73526375868 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532915360502 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6746867462 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.066666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244734439014 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843007762392 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887336886204 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1592954892 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352021183985 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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