Some people with good education and experience in their field decide to move abroad to work.
Why do you think that is?
What problems does this cause?
in the increasing trend of developments in every field it becomes a major betterment that born in many countries. Hence, it is necessary to have better health and wealth as well. So, few of people say that if a person is well-educated he should be in the race of advancements for them, he need an acceptable country which would be suitable for him. In this essay I will discuss my viewpoints and why I think it is being occur with many countries why their people do not want to live there.
There are an abundance of reasons to prove my stance. The first and For most is that the many developed countries are speaking english and it becomes an international language of the world. Therefore, there are many educated masses who can speak english with an ease, for them it is becomes easier to get migrate to many developed countries. Moreover, there are many causes that would make to people to go in another country such as worse transport facilities, unhygienic food and other living expenses in their host country. consequently, When a people see better life than he is in living then he want to catch-all the well furnished amenities for them.
Yet another reason to substantiate my viewpoints regarding this, in plethora of countries have greatest economy rate and a precise weige that they are giving to their employees. It would make superior impression on many countries that are down the line of poverty. For that, people are attaining education much as they acquire then they would get migrate to another countries because it is life altering for them. Eventually, people have listen news that is illustrative regard the developments in many countries for that people intend to get migrate in wealthy nations.
To close, there are some immigrations requirement those cannot be fulfill uneducated masses. Apart from it, well-educated are migrating themselves in fast pace to get stay away from many hurdles those are they facing in the host nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
in the increasing trend of developments in...
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Line 5, column 527, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Consequently
... living expenses in their host country. consequently, When a people see better life than he ...
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Line 5, column 600, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...etter life than he is in living then he want to catch-all the well furnished ameniti...
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Line 9, column 91, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the greatest'.
Suggestion: have the greatest
...egarding this, in plethora of countries have greatest economy rate and a precise weige that t...
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Line 9, column 439, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'listened'.
Suggestion: listened
...ering for them. Eventually, people have listen news that is illustrative regard the de...
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Line 13, column 26, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'immigrations'' or 'immigration's'?
Suggestion: immigrations'; immigration's
... nations. To close, there are some immigrations requirement those cannot be fulfill une...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93093093093 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75089499602 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531531531532 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5674589374 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.466666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128295144951 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450263645543 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554581797688 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820597131696 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437852008314 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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