Some people from poor and rural backgrounds find it difficult to get a university education Universities should make it easier for such groups to enrol To what extent do you agree or disagree

Irrefutable, education is part and parcel of life and it play an amazing role ,whereas the proponents of the former assert that university education should be easy still poor and rural backgrounds can avail enroll .This essay intends to analyse the preseptive in the upcoming paragraph .

To embark on the topic.There are plethora of rationales why universities make edeasier for poor students. First and the foremost, education is their birth right ,from that they can grow significantly. Secondly education provides theoretical and practical knowledge of diverse field consequently, they can get high paid employment. Last but not the least ,nowadays there are no educated workforce if they provide higher education them great opportunities of education after that it will prove fruitful and there will be educated masses with great mantel strength. To cite an epitome ,the university of Australia provides an enroll of all students ,it proves very beneficial for them .
On the paradoxical side, higher education should not be given by the universities of underprivileged students. Firstly ,today era population of countries are increased day by day if there are enrollment of all students then it will become a crowded place and it also reduces amenities. In addition to it , brilliant students will not focus on their study and it will harmful for academics .

In final reckoning, I would like to recapitulate that universities should provide education to the poorer students, but with strict rule and regulations.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, whereas, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40756302521 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04208858924 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609243697479 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3337384885 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.7 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233025215672 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092985833441 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528856520341 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139245059601 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379794482533 0.056905535591 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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