Some people prefer to live in hot climates, whereas others love the lifestyle in countries with cold climate. Discuss both the view and give your opinion.
It is often believed by some people that the summer lifestyle is better compared to the cold winter life. However, there are both advantages and disadvantages in both the lifestyle's. I think that cold climate is good and pleasant to live.
Firstly, In summers people do not need to wear huge clothes as it is hot. I mean that the temperature on a typical summer day is higher than 27 degree Celsius. Hence it is an ideal season for light clothing, moreover, people can enjoy going to a pool or a nearby beach to get relaxed. For Example, In India, children often get summer break from their studies to enjoy and explore more. Additionally, In hot climates there is chance of enjoying cold desserts and soft drinks, which are mostly liked by everyone. This is why some people like hot climates as it give more space for enjoyment.
Turning on to the other side of the argument, lifestyle in cold countries has been advanced yet uncomfortable. In other words, people living in a cold climate have to be in their homes for much of the time as there is a chance of cold injuries like fever and cold. In contrast, Unlike hot seasons there is no water problem. What I mean by this is that in summer months due to an increase in the temperature, ground water gets dried, resulting in a water crisis. For Instance, South Asian countries often lack water sources for agriculture and drinking, which is causing food shortages. In addition to this in the cold months people can enjoy any kind of food as there is no problem of dehydration. People can also enjoy winter sports during this season. It is all the above reasons why people like winter months.
To sum up, although summer season provides some enjoyment, I always like the lifestyle of cold climate as they possess more benefits like the conditions for winter sports and lessen the risk of water scarcity.
- The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australias share of the Japanese tourist market.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.You should write at least 150 67
- The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- The graph below shows the pollution levels in London between 1600 and 2000.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...r day is higher than 27 degree Celsius. Hence it is an ideal season for light clothin...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, i mean, i think, in addition, in contrast, kind of, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68389057751 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50152529665 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519756838906 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0965882127 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6111111111 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2777777778 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203548333151 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719632328582 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545013008618 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137890257068 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549241969653 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.