Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
The technological advancement of the world has created some exclusive debates. Whether to live in a large town or the suburbs is one of them. I favor downtown as city life offers numerous job opportunities as well as more advanced medical support than the rural areas.
Commence with, the affluent cities have a pivotal impact on the economic growth of a country. Since most of the industries are situated around these cities, they exhibit a major range of job vacancies compared to suburbs. Moreover, The urban environment demonstrates a competitive nature so the salaries are quite handsome there. All these benefits allow us to lead a more comfortable and luxurious life downtown than uptown. To cite an example, an article in "Daily Buggle" indicates that " The jobs in big cities provide about 45% more salaries compared to rural areas."
On the other hand, the medical amenities in large towns are more technologically advanced than in small towns. Furthermore, they offer various facilities such as one-call ambulance, Home doctor services, and so on. Especially, the hospitals in these areas have more equipment to detect and heal diseases which is a big help. For instance, research by "Khulna University" reflects that " about 50% of people living in rural areas are suffering from basic health issues."
In a nutshell, the living standards in a big city are far superior to a small town. Even though life in the outskirts of the urban areas may offer a sound climate and peace, these areas lack work opportunities and vital medical amenities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21317829457 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97784671523 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616279069767 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1033778794 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.083333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132073657481 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441238932968 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545726287903 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925930060759 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393652614393 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.