Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do their food shopping online. discuss both views and give your opinion.
Online shopping trend has become increasingly popular today. When many people do their food shopping in the supermarkets, others tend to prefer online shopping without visiting the shops. This essay will discuss why online shopping is convenient for people but why traditional food shopping is ultimately superior.
Nowadays, many people prefer to buy products from online, as it helps them to save a lot of time spending in the shops. People can get preferred food items at our door step within the click of a button. For instance, many supermarkets in larger cities provide fast delivery options, and helps to avail the products within 3 hours. Thus, buying items from online supermarkets, helps the people to save their precious time without standing for hours to get the grocery items.
But there are many people who prefer to get their products directly from the supermarkets, as it is more pleasurable experience for them. Going to shops and selecting items to their basket is preferred by many people, because which can give confidence for them what they are selecting. In addition, they can choose the products from a range of items. For instance, there are array of items can seen in the supermarket, from that we can select the particular item we need. It is always good for those who have sufficient time and interested to enjoy the traditional shopping methods.
In conclusion, with the introduction of online shopping has changed the way people did traditional shopping in the past. This essay discussed the reasons why online shopping is more convenient process, as well as traditional shopping is a pleasurable experience . In my opinion, supermarket shopping has a better experience than selecting groceries from online .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20848056537 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77760910537 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494699646643 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.471284232 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.2666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395279986563 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144428893375 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110523918503 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254758941883 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102286249446 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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