change is inevitable. Certain people argue that its better to stay in the same job, while others think differently., who are in favor of the change. I personally support variations. This essay will highlight both schools of thought and will subsequently draw an opinion.
on the one hand, people are more curious about their family needs as compared to personal desires. The reason behind such minds is to run the family and meet their routine needs. To begin with, a person doing a job to feed his family, do not think beyond his family. In case, if he changes the employment the risk factor will remain himself which ultimately left an impact on family members.
on the other hand, undoubtedly, a lot of people are in favor of the change. They believe that having the same routine will stick them and make them like a robot. That is to say, If one has a job other than his passion, get tired very early. Moreover, by tasting the different flavors of life one remains fresh-minded. To put an example. mostly well-known persons like Markzakerburga, who owns Facebook, do different business parallel.
Looking at my side, I go with the followers of change. Because this is human nature to demand variations. But, here is to mentions that one should take the decision on his own will rather than on the suggestions of others, which means while changing employment one must consider the expected worse impacts of this initiative for his family.
To sum up, Change is always good for people who run their life. Doing different things make one enough mature and up-to-dated. But one should keep the circumstances into consideration while adopting new expectations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90812720848 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67679914362 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60777385159 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9439651121 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.45 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.15 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180004879279 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487069125733 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458976832396 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100476993517 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380219157193 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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