Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things avoiding any change. Others, however, think change is necessary. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.
It seems to me that the topic of alterations in life become more and more popular every day. There is no single opinion among the society whether changes are important. Some people tend to preserve their old way of life, while others try to be open to something new. I am going to consider both views and provide my own opinion in this essay.
There are many people in the society that claim that changes are not necessary and tend to be close to everything new in life. They try to perform their activity without any differences such as unfamiliar places,new acquaintances and even food and clothes. These individuals like the way of their life and stick to it, since any difference in their habits or environment can have a dramatic effect on their mind. They are afraid of changes as they are usually connected with some hardships and adaptation. For example, some people never travel to some new places, because they do not want to be in the unfamiliar environment, speak to strangers or adapt to different climate conditions.
However, there exist another type of personality that cannot imagine it’s life without changes. These people are open to new people, places and conditions that can give them possibilities. A person that like alterations because they make life more interesting and memorable. Moreover, unfamiliar conditions and acquaintances can give new experience and knowledge that can be valuable in the future. For instance, people that travel to other countries can improve the language and make new foreign friends.
All in all, the topic of changes is controversial. Some people hate the differences, while others cannot live without them. Personally, I think that alterations are important as they can help us be better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , new
...ny differences such as unfamiliar places,new acquaintances and even food and clothes...
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Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: IT_IS[10]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (=it is)?
Suggestion: its
...type of personality that cannot imagine it’s life without changes. These people are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0412371134 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77072710835 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54295532646 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4307058997 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2941176471 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1176470588 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2195540702 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702479659997 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045010235702 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137712897442 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474502005029 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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