Some people prefer to spend their lives doing same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always good. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
According to statement, few of individuals reveal to spend life without alternatives by doing similar practices. Yet, others consider that changes are prominent due to numerous aspects. It seems to me as, former view is more supportive and couple of notions are explained in forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, in contemporary settings, alternative changes play vital role in routine tasks. However, some individuals prohibit such changes due to few of reasons. First and foremost distraction from schedule. Because, in busy hectic schedule, it is more complex to manage time in revelant manner. Due to which, individuals provide attention more towards their duties with same things instead of changing format. As a result, they prohibits change in their lives and promote to spend it with similar schedule and tasks.
On contrast, others and I personally opines that changes are valuable and more significant in life especially in modern era. Because, in present settings, technology and advancement in all sectors are proliferate with rapid speed. Due to which, this represents dominant impact on lifestyle of masses. Because, with utilisation of such innovative technology, competitive tasks become complete expressively without perlex. Thus, this becomes convinient manner for individuals which alters change in lifestyle. In addition, technological era is entirely full of informative and knowledgeable skill. In this criteria, individuals promote alternates due to which they become keen towards numerous section which includes booster of knowledge and information. For instance, innovation of electric appliances are more significant in contemporary era. Due to which, this also shows positive impact on intelligence of masses. Because, they are aware of technology and such items which reveals their interest in that. As a result, this becomes positive aspect for alternation.
To recapitulate, according to my outlook, although few people avoid change due to relevant reasons. On other hand, changes are favourable in plenty of aspects which alter change in lifestyle with superior and prominent manner such as, innovative technology, information skill and so on.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'prohibit'
Suggestion: prohibit
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Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'opine'
Suggestion: opine
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'proliferated'.
Suggestion: proliferated
...logy and advancement in all sectors are proliferate with rapid speed. Due to which, this re...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
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...informative and knowledgeable skill. In this criteria, individuals promote alternate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, so, thus, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1854.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68711656442 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01439331406 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555214723926 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.836277873 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2727272727 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17551762848 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525316079213 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578445857773 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130065750467 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558356459022 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.13 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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