some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same thing and avoiding change.Others,however think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion
change is inevitable .All days will not be the same, if people are spending their lives concentrating on the same thing life will become monotonous and even make it depressed and tough .People should accept the changes as the technology grows up with new developments and explorations.One should embrace the changes and develop his knowledge level by updating day to day affairs.
Some people always stick on to traditional beliefs and practices as they are not willing to accept the changes and they are not ready to take any risks in life.Especially elderly people who cannot accept the modern lifestyles and new technology.To be more precise , it can be argued that change in life does not happen without assuming any risk , but some people prevent any change from happening as they fear it may lead to some tragedy .For example some parents do not allow their daughters to wear modern dresses as they fear that it may lead her to some trouble or unnecessary things and so they restrict them from doing so and those girls are always advised to wear something traditional .
On the other hand some people are ready to embrace changes and they update themselves as the technology advances .They try to spend their time experimenting with many new things.Even some illiterate people living in remote areas have knowledge in computer and internet as they are willing to accept the new innovations .Developments take place people travel along with the changes without creating a hindrance .One cannot argue a person to behave like the people in 90's.Changes in the modes of transport,industries and lifestyles of people have always helped in the development of the nation and it has many positive aspects
In conclusion change paves the way for innovations and discoveries in life and one should be ready to accept new things in life and spent their time more effectively
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'even so', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.23602484472 0.247107183377 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.189440993789 0.155533422707 122% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0962732919255 0.0946595960268 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.055900621118 0.0501214627716 112% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0621118012422 0.0437548338989 142% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.111801242236 0.122226691241 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0403726708075 0.0403226058552 100% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.84134923977 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0403726708075 0.0326793684256 124% => OK
Particles: 0.00310559006211 0.00163938923432 189% => OK
Determiners: 0.0900621118012 0.0861772015684 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0310559006211 0.021408717616 145% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00310559006211 0.011925033212 26% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2139.0 1933.35771543 111% => OK
No of words: 316.0 316.048096192 100% => OK
Chars per words: 6.76898734177 6.12580529183 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.348101265823 0.374742101984 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.21835443038 0.28420135186 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.142405063291 0.203846283523 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.110759493671 0.137316102897 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84134923977 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.037074148 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512658227848 0.56093040696 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 52.4080417704 60.7387585426 86% => OK
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0891783567 19% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 105.333333333 20.7743622355 507% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 171.644982449 49.517814964 347% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 713.0 127.492653851 559% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 105.333333333 20.7743622355 507% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 0.814263465372 327% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 3.99599198397 676% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 127.168776371 49.1944974215 259% => OK
Elegance: 1.26262626263 1.69124875643 75% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309961754934 0.332605444948 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.3345829691 0.102741220458 326% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0929168648867 0.0668466124924 139% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.534860350844 187% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 2.28878339926e-16 0.148594505496 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.239622476211 0.134430193775 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0213754874024 0.0742795772207 29% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.338901727106 0.324371583561 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.061042426096 0.0638462369009 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214414532163 0.228012699653 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391863869669 0.058150111329 67% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.68436873747 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 5.90881763527 34% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 3.0 10.4468937876 29% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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